Short Film Title Animation Idea

We as a group have not finally yet decided on the title for our film but we have few ideas. The top two are "Behind Closed Doors" and "Beyond the Darkness". In the video below I used the second option but it is not our final title. I only used it to come up with some ideas on how we could show our title in the film opening scene. The idea came to me after seeing a YouTube video which did most likely the same thing. It was a tutorial so the idea wasn't copy righted and it was used to teach people how to create logos/titles like that.

I think this idea will work pretty well as the writing just turns into smoke and disappears (this is not a full animation) and it represents our protagonist in a way. He doesn't remember anything he lost his memory, he is in the darkness basically and it's like his memory vanished just like the title animation above.